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for In the Jungle

by PlanetPluto

schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I read it so often...
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person Niki
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this was great
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Katya
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. Honestly. Got me hot! :D Sev and Hermione are my favorite couple, and it's hard to find good smut like this.

You said we could make requests... do you think you could manage a one-shot where like, Hermione and Sev are married, and one day, somehow, Hermione is like, molested by Lucius or Bellatrix (for some reason Bella and Sev fighting over Hermione is HOTT *shrug*) or SOMEONE evil like that, and they're like, feeling her up and covering her mouth where she can't scream, and then Sev finds them and fights them? And then he shows Hermione who's boss... ;) Or, you could even twist it around that she was being seduced by one of them and she could barely resist, and Sev comes across the scene and gets rid of the other person, then grabs Hermione and reminds her why she married him?

I would write it myself... I just don't have the guts to write smut. For some reason it's really difficult for me to write, which is ridiculous because I read it so much. But anyway... whatever's comfortable for you. If you can't, that's fine. But if you do write it, could you email me and let me know?

In any case, this was excellent and I hope that whatever plot bunny you write, you do some more great smut!
person Applekissis
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wONDERFUL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i HAVE A FEW...LOL, REQUEST, I LOVE HG/SS SO IF U HAVE MORE FAN FIC WITH THEM GREAT!
I'M ALSO A HUGE FAN OF HG/LM- SOMETHING EROTIC AND SWEET,ROMANTIC AND VERY RAW!...
person Emalee
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was... beautiful. I love stories like that, resisting something so strong, just to feel the love coming from Hermione. I love your stories, keep writing.
person coldqueen
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm...I liked this one too. Didn\'t make me giggle like the other one...well, it did, but in an entirely different way.

Hmmm...I want to request a fic...Hermione/Snape, as always...I want it to be rough though...not rape, consensual...but rough and slightly naughty...it has to be their first time together...happen in a classroom...and involve pudding...

So yeah...YOU CAN DO IT!
person grugster
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story! Very hot! ;)
As for the request thing: I have a very daring story request because I would like to read a Snape/Pomfrey story or if you hate this idea even anything with Snape and the infirmary! ;)
person nicole
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story i want to find more like it