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for Lemon Sweet

by PlanetPluto

schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Anything??.....Damn you for making me make such a horrible decision:)Hmmm...Even though Remus and Hermione are my favorite, I would love to see Hermione and Lucius. Evil is sexy!...Wonderful story...I loved the pairing!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story beyond kinky. Grandpa sex, different! Anyway I have two requests: A) remus/sirius after azkaban with sirius pregnant(would like it real-like but with hot scenes(also prefer long one-shot)). B) ginny/ron(consentual, but with dark undercurrent and steamy!) If you could write up either request or both it would be appreciated. It's hard to find really good stories.
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hott
person Byrk
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot. I love hot M/F FF around Albus! Thanks for writing and sharing ;-)!
person gryfforin
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really admire your courage in writing this. You're better than I.... but since I now see that you will write any pairing let me see....

Rita Skeeter/Colin Creevey. Loose on the details, but I was thinking post-hogwarts and he's trying to break into the wizarding media.
person mariteri
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congrads! That was fast. But still, personally, I can't get past him just being a dirty old man.
P.S. if you don't like certain couplings, don't offer to write ANY THAT THE REQUESTER WANTS! True, it tests you as a writter, but if you don't like the subjects, it is reflected in the story. RE-Both of the ones that were requested that you didn't care for the coupling were much shorter and the quality wasn't the same as the one that you did like that pair (Hermione-Snape). Anyway, good luck and I hope to read more . ma.
person June
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!! I've never seen an Albus-Ginnyry, ry, and you actually make it believable and sweet and hot. Great job!!
person lyn
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lemony fresh! Cute one shot. How about trying a pairing of Blaise Zabini and Minerva Mcgonagall? With Blaise in the role of seductor. I've had the plot bunny forever, but can't seem to work it out. Maybe you can!
lyn
person peggywoo
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've never been one for May/September smut, but you did as well as could be expected. Stands to reason Dumbledore wouldn't be going without sex.

Here's a one shot smut plot bunny that keeps bugging me to write it, but if you write it instead hopefully it will stop bugging me. Snape has to delay Umbridge at some stage during OOTP. Several lust potions and some rather explicit and unpleasant sex later (remember, JKR dislikes Snape and hates Umbridge, so have no qualms about what you get these guys to do to each other) the mission is accomplished. Bonus points if you can include Umbridge saying ahem-hem when Snape gets off first leaving her unsatisfied. I suggest finishing the fic with snape in the shower scrubbing himself and shuddering in revulsion.