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Ch 6 - I hope she gets her life together and forgets Draco AND Harry and Ginny. Find some new mature friends, get a new life and career, leave Hogwarts behind. And he should give her a bucket of money to pay for everything, and leave her alone. She deserves someone who loves her and treats her like a queen.

i don\'t know why you don\'t like your own story, but it is beautifully written, even though it is about rape, a lot of women go through those feelings. i love it, please continue.

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is hermione going to be strong and tell draco all she feels, or is she going to be weak and let him have her.

oh my gosh. I dont know what to say. That story is so... so... beautiful. Well not in the traditional sense but the way you discribe everything that happens evokes sadness, pain, disgust, everything. I love it. I guess it might be sadistic but the way you write with the perfect blend of the depiction of characters, scenes, and setting. I urge you to keep on writing. I dont know how you can improve the already almost perfect plot. I\'m sure you\'ll manage. I\'m impatiently awaiting the next chapter. xoxox
who cares

*firstly bows to Queen of Serpents*
Now this was a great chapter! awesome work!
poor hermione though! After not knowing where Harry is and he finally return - he blames her just as much as Ginny! *glares at Ginny*
And now she thinks that she\'s totally alone! it least when Draco *came to her* Hermione knew that she had someone! but now i think that she has no idea what to do or think! *sigh* ah well... she just needs to tell him how much it ment for him to be there - even if he was raping her - because it meant that she wasn\'t invisible...
again great chapter! i don\'t think i saw any typos so that was awesome! *grin* great work! also thanks for mentioning me at the bottom of the chapter! *grin* i felt special!
I\'d really like it if you emailed my the chapters... you mentioned it in ur authors note thingy and that\'d be great! well hope to be reading more sometime soon! good luck and again great chapter...
Elektra
p.s. *grin* i\'ll go have a look at fanfiction.net! don\'t feel bad about advertising! i\'ll do it now to make you feel better! could you check out Let the Games Begin! by SlytherinSisters? my best friend and i are writing it... what do you think? thanks!

Hey, I\'m really flattered to be mentioned at the end of this chapter. MAde me love it all the more. Sorry I haven\'t replied to your email but I will eventually. Honest. I loved this chapter, although, yes, it wasn\'t very productive. I\'m about to read the next chapter now. woo. So, I\'ll review again in a minute. probably.
Lov Beki x x x

Oo, just read fifth chapter. Update asap please...
Lotsa lov,
x~Beki~x
(ThE_bAd_EgG)

This is such an awesome story. The rape thing was kinda a turn on no matter how strange that sounds, but I really like how this is going. I love how you use both Hermione\'s and Draco\'s point of view. Please update soon. I can\'t wait!

hey there...
i read your story in one go and i really liked how you handled it...but i dont see why you need an OOC..you won\'t put them together?
i mean i like HG/DR the most and i think they should be together in one way or another...
anyhow i\'ll keep checking this and wish you good luck..