rate_review Reviews

Great story. Very well written

Ooo. Chapter 8 is so wonderfully deep. THe way you portray Draco\'s emotional and mental status is superb. My fingers are itching for Chapter 9......

Ch 8 - thank you for finishing this! (At least, Part 1, if there really will be a sequel.) I\'m glad Draco is really growing up, thinking of others and not just himself. I do hope he doesn\'t become a Death Eater. Maybe he should just run away and send Dumbledore info to help the Order; that would keep Hermione alive. Thanks again for the chapter!

Just....uh...WOW again. I keep finding myself checking for updates on your story like everyday and was thrilled to see your 7th chapter out. Good job. Always love your work. Now I just can\'t wait till 8 comes out.....*twindles fingers and stares at computer* :)

hey there ..
i just finished reading the seventh chapter...and i was really waiting for it .... i simply love this story...
you\'ve got style....and i love it..
please write more...i\'ll be waiting...
best of luck.

when is the next charter going to be posted cos i think its great so far?!
thanx 4 rittin it

Hey i\'m back and damn this was good! I\'m sure that EVERYONE will LOVE it (i know that i have!!!) and i can\'t wait to find out what happens!!! only a couple tiny grammatical errors that i could spot so you\'re doing really well!

what can i say other than i should have seen this coming... honestly? i didn\'t know what to expect with the next chapter... but i can see how Malfoy feels... He\'s stuck in a rut as much as she is!! The poor guy... once a proud, cold, prue blood prince... reduced to a guilty sympathetic git... *in his eyes that is* i dunno... i dont\' mind that he\'s not as... horrible? nar... better word... that he\'s gone soft and isn\'t as cold and aloof! *nods* that\'s better! but ur right!! it\'s FAN FICTION people! that means the Queen can do as she pleases... plus i think that Draco is acting like this because he\'s never felt this way about anyone before... i don\'t even know if he\'s felt anything for anyone before!! (mind you am a little surprised that Draco just got up and left... i mean i can see the he has a conscience and all... but it was like Hermione gave up... she was begging... but i suppose... Draco was begging too...) i kind of like the way he\'s acting... i mean at least he\'s trying to help both of them! but somehow i think that the harder they try to fight it... the stronger the attraction will be! good luck to them if they try and say apart! just look what nearly happened after only a week?!?!

i\'m a bit worried about Hermione at the moment (it\'s her POV next isn\'t it?) i mean she was left bloody confused... She didn\'t and most likely still doesn\'t know where Draco\'s gone, what he\'s done or what he\'s thinking... it must be like wandering around in a mist and then Draco walks up with a lantern and then leaves her after taking... what? 5 steps? i just hope that she doesn\'t do anything stupid...

It\'s funny how you start out with one idea and your imagination just runs wild with all the possibilities! i like this chapter and these events! well done! i\'m sure that no one will be disappointed! just can\'t wait to read what happens!

You read LtGB!? in BOTH places? awesome! *grin* you like it? sooo happy!!! *dances* well we\'re going to write some more soon! the next chapter for hpff is already written! so it should be posted as soon as possible!

just glad that you like getting my opinion! don\'t worry about flames... that all part of writing *unfortunately!!!* well i can\'t WAIT to read more! hope that you email when you update! good luck! and keep up the awesome work!!

Elektra

Love this story from the beginning and can\'t wait to see the final outcome. Listen, from author to author, I read some of the stupid flames you received at Fanfiction.net due to people being either too light-in-the-ass when it comes to rape scenes or OOC-ness regarding the characters. One of the things these idiots have to remember is that it\'s \"FAN FICTION\"! It\'s the way the fan wishes to portray the character. Turn a deaf ear to those retards. Secondly, a trick to writing a good story is to please yourself FIRST. If you are content with the final outcome of a story, then the fans should like it, too. Any well-written story will be well-liked even if the subject matter is touchy or delicate for the reader. Keep your head up and remember my tips. ;)

It\'s awsome. So much emotion in one story. I get the idea that your planning for Hermione to do something awful, to either herself, or Draco. I cried during chapter 6, and now with chapter 7, I was crying again. please continue.

I just have to ask whether you are transferring everything from fanfiction.net to here. As in, are you going to stop writing in fanfiction.net? Bye. :D