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for Delightful Pain

by sabreenthequeen

person sesshy_lover
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO YOU CANNOT END IT LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU EVIL PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ILL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE CONTINUE DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i seriously do... *crying...*
person Jacky
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there...
you know i love this story so much...and i will always support your wonderful work...
please keep me in your mailing list...
i\'d love to hear about any competitions so i can vite for you...
take care..
person lazy
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was powerful! congrats! I love this story!!!
person liz figs
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... that was amazing. i swear i am almost in tears. my GOD it was so good.... well i\'m speechless.... oneword: INCREDIBLE!!!
person dragon34
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic. I think it showed true emotion. brilliant
person lazy
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is great!
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was brilliant. BRILLIANT.
much love
Eddie
person bloodsugar
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi! i\'ve been reading fics here at aff for a long time, but i\'ve never had the courage to submit a review...and here i am, submitting a review. i know the story is almost finished, but i just wanted to tell you that i really enjoyed reading Delightful Pain. There were some parts that i felt were a little implausible, but on the whole, i felt that the story was convincing enough. it\'s also a great respite for me after reading a couple of rape fics that, like a past reviewer said, were \"he rapes her, then she starts liking it, then she falls in love with him.\" I never liked stiories like that because ( i haven\'t been raped either, thank heavens) I imagine it would be difficult to think well of (much less love) someone who violated you horribly. I also think that the way you characterized Hermione was convincing, and even Draco (even if he was rather \"out-of-character when compared to the books). All in all, thanks for sharing a good story here on aff--you were good enough to drive me out of lurker-dom! ^____^
person Lorena
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are u kidding me????? This is the last chapter???? NOOOOO why are you doing this???, Don\'t they get to have sex again, they have to have sex, they have to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope the epilogue explains it all, because that CANT BE THE LAST FREAKING CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person shasta
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!!!!!! this is soooo good! but come on... i thought it was completed?!?!?!? what, just one more chappie? you can do it, come on.
o, btw, in chappie 10, i think, hermione says he got 10 years of imprisonment, but in the next chapter he says its only 10 months. just a typo? or does she seriously think its 10 years?
another thing... ive been reading temporary on ffnet, and i love it!!! i need to go review, but im lazy and it wont be a constructive review anyways... just a, \"WOW! THIS KICKS ASS! UPDATE!!\" kind of thing. but yea, if i do do that, my sn is dracosbabigirl, so you can look for it and what not...
anyways, i love this!!!! i didnt expect that i\'d like a rape story, but this is different. i dont know what about it, but its captivating... i just read the whole thing in about an hour and now im like... what? no! it cant stop! i want more!!!
ok. ive gone on way too long now... off to write that review for you and read some of your other stories on ffnet.
shasta