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September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I've read it at FFN and I can't wait for the next update there and here.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Delightful Pain is delightful! I was hooked from the first chapter.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Exactly what I was looking for! Nicely written...you have a good grasp on fantasy. I also enjoy rape fantasies. Don't worry about the other person's words. I understand where she's coming from, but rape fantasies are very common and nothing to feel guilty over. If that were the case then every one of us should feel guilty about enjoying angst stories where characters are beaten or sorrowed for some reason.
I do agree though, while Herm might ever feel pleasured by this, I wouldn't go the "love" route without a plausible reason simply because it would be implausible.
Other than that, please continue! Don't feel daunted...it's a common fantasy and oppressing one's self in guilt is NOT healthy. There's nothing wrong with liking what you like as long as it isn't made into reality.
I do agree though, while Herm might ever feel pleasured by this, I wouldn't go the "love" route without a plausible reason simply because it would be implausible.
Other than that, please continue! Don't feel daunted...it's a common fantasy and oppressing one's self in guilt is NOT healthy. There's nothing wrong with liking what you like as long as it isn't made into reality.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grasp on fantasy? I meant descriptiveness! Sheesh, silly me. It's late. ;) Anyway, you write very well. :) Keep it up!
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I like your writinyle yle alot. Pl kee keep up the good work, i'd love to read more! This chapter was excellent for your first time posting on AFF. Keep the chapters comming!
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
From your summary it's clear where you are planning on taking this. Unless you plan on revealing that Draco is under Imperio or something similar, please do not follow with something along the lines of "Then Hermione had an orgasm and fell in love with him". You describe yourself as a young writer, I can only presume that means you are in your teens. It's an important point (and one would presume a clear one) that rape victims do not fall in love with their attackers. While rape fantasies are not altogether uncommon, they are very different from actual rape in one essential way : the "victim" remains in control of the fantasy. Actual rape has nothing to do with love, and, as someone who has spent many evenings helping friends deal with the aftermath of rape, I find it disturbing that sexual violence is treated in such a cavalier fashion. On the upside, your writing ability seems quite good, and I'm sure I would enjoy other works by you.