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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for being so dedicated to writing stories and having the courage to post them. I'm 18. and just joined ff.net. These are so good. I just wanted to let you know to keep writing, because even those who are silent in their reviews are loving your stories
Thanks
~~Ally~~
Thanks
~~Ally~~
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't be silent anymore. I've admire your writing and think it cool. I was reading another story that was intresting and they stoped writting it. I hope you keep writing yours. This last chapter was intresting. He like stoped coming to her to not hurt her but ended up huting her. How Irontic
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione's all twisted up inside, thanks to sicko Draco! Besides, the sex, I don't see how she can tolerate his behavior. Why isn't she fighting him?! I'm not badmouthing this story, I just want to know why she doesn't fight back. I hope all will be revealed.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sick
Gooood
But sick
Hellva rape fantasy you got going on there kiddo.
Keep it up
Trio
Gooood
But sick
Hellva rape fantasy you got going on there kiddo.
Keep it up
Trio
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh....wow! You just can`t leave it there though, I mean, I have to know what happens next. This story is just amazing, but its also very dark. I can`t wait to find out whats going to happen! Please write more
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Loved it! Simply great. It was v. good, and I think what made it work extra well for me, was the change in narrator. I think it was a clever idea and I can't wait for the next upate! Keep up with the writing and I'll be looking out for the next chapter.
Lotsa lov,
Beki
X~B~X
Lotsa lov,
Beki
X~B~X
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have to update! you just HAVE TOO! It's so AWESOME that awesome isn't even a word to describe it. There is no good enough word to describe it.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I've been reading aff for nearly a year now, and I think you can make your story as extreme as you wish, as it is supposed to be for adults, so long as you include all the proper warnings at the beginning. Adults (those who aren't total sad cases) can make the decision to read or not to read.
Also, if you're having problems writng this genre, it mighthelp if you read more of this sort of thing. Whatever you do, don't give up!
Also, if you're having problems writng this genre, it mighthelp if you read more of this sort of thing. Whatever you do, don't give up!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, sounds like not only is he feeling guilty, he's developing feelings for her. Interesting. We got some background info on him having a crush on her to full-blown sexual attraction to insane obsession. Typical for a Slytherin. Hehe. This story is very good. Please continue. :)
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm terribly sorry that you're discouraged by the scarcity of reviews around here. It is a shame, because this is a very well-written fic and I can't wait to see not only where you take this story, but how it gets there. Sorry for the copious cliches I'm using at the moment, just know that there are some of us who really do enjoy your work- personally, I'm just lazy when it comes to reviewing. I apologize! Please continue writing and update soon!