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for Delightful Pain

by sabreenthequeen

person pennywise
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i don't see how you could get any bad reviews! i usually don't like it when they're out of character, but I mean come on..it's hermione and draco. How are they NOT supposed to be out of character? Anyway I think you're doing a great job so please continue!
person shay
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg... torture i waaant moore!!!!
person too cute
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Gasping for breath* Need...more to survive!
person Pansy D.
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love thtorytory. You' re really talented. Please, update soon! I can't wate!
person Amy
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've never been much of a Hermione-Draco shipper, but I absolutely adore your story. It may be my sick side showing through, but it's incredibly sexy, and, in my opinion, very well-written. Please, keep up the good work. I love Draco's point of view- it's a nice switch.
person Draco_Luva
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I love it so far. But why is there so much blood? Even if he's a little brutal, she wouldn't bleed THAT much would she??
person Richgal
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hits you over the head*

Yea, this chapter and chapter five both took the characters out of character.

Malfoy seemed really pathetically stuiped, why would he feel guilty when he sees blood and her wounds but not when he hears her scream in pain?

But I do love your writing style. :)
person viz
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Hermione's in such emotional pain, I feel depressed! Very angst ridden and well thought out chapter. I can see why Draco and she have such a twisted...dare I say love/hate/sick relationship.
person Apollonia
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. :( Dealing with all of this abuse on her own.

Enjoy the story as always. Please update soon! :)
person jeannette
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was full of emotion, my eyes were glued to the chapters. i can't wait tod mod more