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by PlanetPluto

person Lee
schedule April 21, 2021 at 12:00 AM

So hot my teeth were sweating 

person derp
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
welp, i love this story! it was hot

anyway, can i request a story?
snape / hermione again

umm snape has to protect hermione anddd she is in the dungeons (his 'home') for several days (maybe two weeks??)
and well she's been slowly slowly slowly slowly falling in love with him, and one peaceful night snape reads and..... umm.... she somehow tries to seduce him? but she stutters and blushes alot (awwwwww) and i guess something happens and she somehow falls into his lap (cause being on one's lap is sexy) and they have hot sex lol but um i guess that snape has a very big bulge in his pants but he only fingers hermione, and she moans, and yeah
hot sex
oh and they kiss too

is that okay?

again: the story you wrote was hot
hot
hot
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool story - very nicely done - but it needs a bit of cleaning up to make it even better.
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was really good.
Never really shipped Snape/Hermione but damn!
Great description and a really good seeting
Very very nice.

As I can never resist a challenge heres my idea for a fic...
Snape/Bellatrix... set during sometime during Deathly Hallows...

person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person jenessa
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story!

lol very smuty, and i also read your offer about requested stories...

would you mind if i asked for one?

I love hermione snape pairings and always thought it would be great if they had a situation where hermione is an aprentice and helping him in the a project and then loose controle...that sort of thing, i loved your writting style and am dying to hear back from you in regards to the request!

thank you so much!
Slytherine Sarcasm
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person breastlady
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! What a nice invitation as well.
Here's a plot bunny if you would be so kind. Professor Snape has been ordered by Dumbledore to teach Legilimency to Miss Hermione Granger. He puts everything he thinks would be important to hide in a pensive, but he neglects to hide the fact that he is a virgin. Once Hermione unearths this bit of information she is obsessed with the need to seduce him and make love to him so thoroughly that it will ruin him for any other woman. Her own experience is limited. Therefore she must craft her seduction at least partially on what she has read while researching human sexualiy over last summer. She has the feeling that the dreaded Severus Snape would really like to be dominated. But how to go about it.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person high
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can you do a mix couple of hermione snape harry or even hermione snape draco or harry draco and ginny