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for In Demand

by idarakowsky

schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Go Severus! Even knowing that SS did not realize that it would be LV that would remove the necklace, it is still great. It would be a nice touch if Draco and Hermione could tag team Sirius, the pig. Excellent so far. p
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The way Albus drags good news out, I may have resorted to violence if I were Snape. Don't care of Sirius, do you? (I say this as I have now read a couple of your stories). Excellent. p
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Loved every part of your story. It is a very quick and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sevvie. For someone who is supposed to be so hateful, he is always in the thick of things, protecting, helping, saving, isn't he? And to protect Hermione from Sirius, who has apparently become quite the lech is above and beyond. Love your story so far and can't wait to see where you take it. p
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the allusions to the video. I think all us guys wish we had Alan's ability to ooze sex from every pore... Great little story. Formatting was strange, but I forgave you for the fun ride it was! Of course Hermione would be bossy in bed =)
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story a lot. I think you did a terrific job on it. Although I didn't like that Sirius was made the villian, I still think you did a terrific job of telling it. Nice going.
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why is this story written like this? And why is there so much room at the bottom? Its really
confusing and I don't like the way it's set up. Is there a way you can change is or is it, god
forbid, purposeful?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? or can you write a sequel to this story please?