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for the peep hole

by wyvern

person Panther Eyes
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well ... this is bound to be interesting.
person Breakaway Dreamer
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVED your story!!!!
person eve/roarke
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.K. this is cruel, I have waited months for a update on this story, I love Hermione,Draco and Blaize,
this one chapter story of her looking via a peep hole was so HOT. then to be caught, was the anwser to
a brilliant start to a fanfic, now she leaves them!!!!! and they send her a rose!!!
They should have kidnapped her and shagged her into understanding the relationship, o.k. so we all
have are own thoughts.

Please update soon, within the next few days would be good, tomorrow would be great.
person FlintsKitten
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!

enjoyed every minute of it sweetie, and i hope there\'s an update soon. i love the whole draco/blaise/hermione shipper, been reading alot lately and i must say, one of the best ones i\'ve read.

good luck with writing the next chapter, hope to read more soon.

flintskitten x
person eve/roarke
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please carry it through to a ending, lucky Hermione, just thinking of being sandwiched
between those two wizards, It\'s too hot for words.

Please write more and update soon.
person Autum
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more of this! The way you described the men was great! Hermione wasn\'t the only one who got a little hot and bothered. Great story so far, but with such a good start you have to write more!
person Michelle
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I definetly want to know what happens next! You should add a few more chapters and build the story a bit to make it more intresting....good job.
person Butters
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that knowing this was your first try, it was very good. I liked the descriptions of both men, very attractive! Also, I enjoyed the little flashes of humor-when Ginny mentions that Harry and Ron\'s cocks are \"coming along nicely.\" I laughed at loud. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
person triospleasure
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was SEXY!!! HOT!!! MMMMM

Are you a quiet one?


Trio

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http://www.livejournal.com/users/inell/
person Joey
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!! Lovely absolutly lovely! Tasty too.