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for Breathless

by Ira

schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, have for a while ... I only wish it wasn't abandoned :(
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person moony..
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.. Snape.. uhh..
person aleena
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fascinating. i have to say that was really exactly what ive often thought about but just passed off as bizarre. i wonder what it is about suffocation that appeals. it could be the control, or it could be the intensity of experience. im not sure. but i do know that it was a brave and original story on an intriguing idea.
person AnimaMusicale
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm really interestedsee see where this leads. It was way sexy and I do love a dominating Sev. Hope Hermiones enjoyin' this though...
person June
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - nicely written! I assume that since she came to his room dressed that way and kissed him back, that she made her choice to be with him. Not sure why he has to act quickly now - is it for Round 2, or is he going to Obliviate her? Hopefully it's Round 2! Please update.
person deblovesdragon
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it Ira. Like a little S&M with my Snape.

person June
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - nicely written! I assume that since she came to his room dressed that way and kissed him back, thhe mhe made her choice to be with him. Not sure why he has to act quickly now - is it for Round 2, or is he going to Obliviate her? Hopefully it's Round 2! Please update.