rate_review Reviews

Well, this was certainly different than most of what I\'ve read here. I saw the reasoning and rationale as a desperate attempt to make what Severus was doing as acceptable. Yes, it said that Harry wasn\'t hurt, not physically but emotionally and verbally. Fear is not supposed to be in a loving relationship.

Now that I\'ve got that off my chest, this was great! For a short story, the details of the arrangement they had, the methods of compliance and dominance were clearly laid out. The bold attitude of Harry finally got recognized, but I wondered why if Severus liked it, why he didn\'t ask for it before????

Shahinazi was a perfect little doll. With the \'relaxed\' attitude now prevalent, the next child would not be so groomed.

So what\'s so boring or bad working in a slimy, dark dungeon making potions???? Huh?? Huh?? I\'m sure it was Severus\' way to just watch Harry, as he was so enamoured with just looking at him. The same goes for Harry sitting on his lap for breakfast. Yeah, it\'s also a domineering thing too, but, I\'ll err on the side of romance.

Great story, again, thank you.

A reformed wife-beater? A reformed Death Eater..
Well, I suppose it is possible.
The story was as a matter of fact believeable, and made the rather serious subject interesting and rather realistic in the non-realistic context.
I liked it a lot. Not the usual HP/SS-slash-Snape-is-evil-Harry-falls-in-love-shite...

I really liked this story. I\'d actually read it months ago and I couldn\'t remember the name of it. I had a devil of a time finding it again. But now that I have, it\'s going in my favorites.

I love your story in a strange kind of way. It makes me sad, and angry because I love the character Harry so much, in every fanfic I read Harry\'s personality is always so sweet...that\'s why it makes me so sad to \'see\' him hurt in a so weird way. I like the psychologic side of your story...I don\'t know any woman/girl who were beaten/injured by their husband but I think this description you made of Harry\'s mind must be close to what they feel/think.
Sethian

This was realy good

Annas

Love this, love this, love this, love this, love this, and I'm so glad you have it a happy ending.

Awesome, no other word for it. It's the first i've read in a long time and I'm very impressed, I want more!

WHAT. That's not the end. I don't think so! OH you so have to continue this. I was loving it. ;( :( Please? A Sequel? Prequel? Lemon? Pleeeeeeeease? I loved this story either way. The angst just gets me all mooshy inside.

Cheers,
MOiT

This is so sad! Continue? *laughs* Aside from the lack of paragraphs this is really very good. The IDEA itself is very good. Pleasntinntinue soon.

I like this! Please update soon.