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*Cough lovers spat cough* Ah, young love! Charlie and Hermione are still adorable even when they're fighting. Don't have much to say except, good as usual.

I really, really love this story. It's a sweet plot, well written, and very enjoyable. The problem is, all of the spelling and punctuation errors are driving me nuts! Every time I come across one, it throws me out of its flow. Please use spell check or have someone else look at it for any mistakes you might have missed.

Omg i gosh i luv this story so much. 1 becasue im dyslexic 2 i luv Hermoine luv fics and 3 you r a great wrietr.
But the story is so hurtful i wanna cry plz dont let draco and charlie fight over hermoine. I Creid when ron and harry died its horrible.
you r really goofd keep up the great work
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The diva

hey this is an awesome story. i cant wait to find out what happens. please update it soon

I like this fic very much and the moments really tugged at my heart..............Please up date soon and keep up with the excellent work

I'm eager to read what Draco's reaction will be when he finds out about Hermione's pregnancy, especially seeing that he (in my interruptation) seems to be falling in love with her. Ah, the angst! Great chapter by the way.

I found this story a couple of days ago and started to read it. Oh wow...where to start? Its a great plot and the pairing is so out of the ordinary Harry Potter Romantic FanFics...solusolutely love how you write but why did Ron and Harry have to die. *sobs* why?!?!?! Anyways I cant wait to read when the whole school finds out about her pregnancy. I was almost expecting Malfoy to fall into the roll of his half brothers father or something like that but I like the Hermione/Charlie pairing. Okay so I think I had more to say but now I forgot and I should probably try and sleep sometime tonight. Great Story!!

It would be hard loosing the two people you care about most, I wonder if that baby isn't ron's.
Though it would do Draco good emotionally to have a half brother someone who would love him truly as he is.

Aw, hell you even made Draco likeable! I love every thing about this story. Pat yourself on the back since I'm a fickle bitch and usually lose interest after a few chapters. ^_^

Great Chapter. Your diction and spelling errors have disappeared...like magic. I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the great work.