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That last bit was very insightful.

You are a very talented story teller.

Brilliant as always...one question? What the heck is up with the baby dreams? Do they have a special meaning to them? A good meaning or a bad meaning? Or is Hermione just crazy hormonal like my pregnant sister is? Lol.

Hermione's showing now, how long before everyone knows her business? Hmm...

ok, awwwwwwwwww! ahem, sorry, done now. that was sooooo...etc. sweet. yeah yeah, i know they had to die, boo hiss, such is life, life goes on, yadda yadda yadda. hermione and charlie's relationship is so sweet. i love the way its progressing. and draco, i love you you portray him. you really get to see a side of him that you didnt think existed. and that he only really shows this side to hermione shows howh heh he really cares about her. they seem like they should be together, but i guess i shall see. lovin it and as always, cant wait til next chapter!

I've only just located your story, and have read all 20 chapters at once, it is really great, the story line had me
in tears, over Ron and Harry, plus poor Hermione's ordeal with Lucius. Am rooting for Charlie, but Bill seems to
be in the background too. Draco seems taken with Ginny, I personally like that combination.

My daughter is in College at the moment, she also has dyslexia, she also writes fanfics, like I tell her, you should
be proud of your story, a high achievement.
5 stars please update soon.

I love how the story has progressed. Charlie is so tender and understanding! I hope Hermione stays with him. I don't quite like Draco getting into the picture, but I guess you do need the conflict to keep us all guessing. This has really evolved -- I reviewed a while ago a thi think you have a great gift for storytelling. You just need a really good editor;) Sometimes the errors can mask over the real quality here, and that's a shame. I'd edit the story but it's so very long now and I think it'd take a long time. Maybe paste it into MS WOrd and let it spell check -- I'm sure you can easily fix a few things that way without even needing a beta. But overall, the plot is excellent. I'm so glad to see one of the "lesser Weasleys" having more to say and do. :) Please update soon!

Another wonderful chapter! I just loved Charlie is so crazy in love with Hermione. And she with him...if they'd admit it! *Sigh* :)

Awww! I'm such a girl...anyway, everythings all good this chapter around and I'm glad Hermione and Charlie made up. I'm even glader (is that even a word?) that your version of Draco is so cool. ^_~

wow, this just keeps getting better and better. i absolutely LOVE where this is going. im still sad that harry and ron had to die, but youre plot just wouldnt work without the heartache of it. anyways, once again, i absolutely love it. cant wait till the next chapter as always. thanks

Well, I hope Draco is involved in his little brother or sisters life, he's all ready changed, I hope she has a little girl I hope you give her a very unique name.