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for Broken Smile

by pidge

person DrkMnComikker
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what about me? I reviewed!

And I KNEW IT!!!

TITAN!! NOOO!!! HE\'S TURNING INTO LUCIUS, AND IT\'S ALL HER FAULT!!!!
person thelorelei
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah! You\'ve made such a wonderful story, and I adore Charlie... this is gorgeous work...
person Heather
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! you need to keep writing!!! only every so often do i come across a story on here with some actuall plot and drama, its so refreshing!!! i look very much forward to reading your next chapter! :)
person Kimberly
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why doesn\'t anyone like Titan? Poor thing he could just break your heart. He\'s so confused. All step children go through a phase like his at some point. He needs to be told the truth about his father. Then he might understand his mom\'s feelings and Charlie\'s attitude. Please have Hermione tell him soon or now that Ron is at school too people will ask to many questions and he\'ll hear it from the wrong person. Please?

And if you can\'t tell from the rambling above.....I really like this story of yours. It\'s got a great plot, doesn\'t drag on, and is well written. Thank you.
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, drama filled chapter! And I really don\'t hate Titan, I just wonder (and worry) he has Lucius Malfoy tendencies. That would be scary and really cruel to poor Hermione. I want Titan to be good!! Really! Awesome story. ^_^
person Juri
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I feel really bad for Titan now. I\'ll stop disliking the kid since I know it\'s growing pains and all kids his age are pains in the ass. Lol. Still, he\'s going to be so crushed when he finally finds out the truth of his birth. Maybe it\'ll help him appreciate Charlie more though. I hope. *Crosses fingers*
person saintthistle
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that chapter was amazing! Please update again soon, I love this story.
person DrkMnComikker
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Back again! Why the long wait? I WANTED MORE STORY!!

Does this mean Hermione is going to tell Titan how he came to be? If so, I just KNOW Titan will be devastated.

And i plan on being a regular from here out, os expect to see more of my lovely face.
person annalumos(not logged in)
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! It\'s real interesting to see how Charlie and Malfoy still despise one another and Hermione practices as mediator. And Charlie and Hermione...aw! Too sweet. I look forward to reading more.
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Titan going to turn out to be a little bastard like his father? I hope not, although he\'s acting like one. Still, could be just displaying childlike behavior. Hmm...