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for Broken Smile

by pidge

person Juri
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cheers* Loved it! Brilliant ending from a damn great writer! From the start it had the perfect mix of emotion, humor and great story telling. It\'s so good I must add it to my favorites and I can\'t wait to read the next story you post.
person Shampoo
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You honestly brought me to tears after reading this last chapter. Very touching chapter. You rock! ^_^
person DrkMnComikker
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. FLUFFY!!!

PET THE KITTY!!!

And I hope the old man doesn\'t get beat too bad.
person Juri
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals girlishly* Of, I loved this chapter best of all. Titan has really matured (poor thing) and has learned to be appreciative and seen how lucky he is to have his family. I thought the Charlie/Titan and the Titan/Hermione talks were especially poignant. Nicely done! ^_^
person DrkMnComikker
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP!!

*insert dramatic music*

HE KNOWS!!! RUN!! ASSUME THE FETAL POSITION!!!
person Shampoo
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Highly powerful scene to leave off at. I\'m impressed...and I can\'t wait to read more.
person annalumos (not logged in)
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Shocked* What a harsh wake up call for Titan. Well, if this get him talking with his family and maybe reconcillating, then good. One question? How \'does\' he find out? Was that a dream he saw or what?
person Juri
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, poor Titan! What a horrible thing to find out. I definitely no longer dislike the kid after that. Now I\'m dying here!! I beg you to update as soon as humanly possible so I can read how Titan reacts to what he experienced. What a cliffhanger!
person saintthistle
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter! The tension in the family is very well written, I hope it all works out for Christmas and that Hermione and Titan can finally talk about it. Please keep going and update soon :)
person erin kite
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, phew, drama drama drama. that was intense right there. but i loved it. i cant wait till you update again. love love loved it.