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for Broken Smile

by pidge

person Anon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good fic
person morter
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly written and executed. Best story I\'ve ever read.
person Woodsgypsy
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!! It is very well written. It did make me cry at times. Please continue to write.
person Narcissa Black
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic should have a 40 tissue rating. Very true, very emotional. But did you have to name him Titan? He\'s not an X-Man.
person samantha
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story!!! Tears are streaming down my face and all I can think about is reading it again. I love Charlie/Hermione fics and I believe that this has to be one of the best out there. There is so much more that I want to say about how much I loved this story, but I can\'t find the words...I just know that the past hour or so I spent reading this was definitely time well spent. Thanks again for a wonderful story!
person erin kite
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* its over. i still want more, but im glad it ended like this. hermione finally found closure. i love this story so much. im glad i had so much to come back to after being grounded. it made me very happy. i cant wait to read any other stories you have. i bet they are just as good. thanks for the wonderful story.
person LucKyo
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story literally kicks ass! One of the best plots I\'ve read in a while. I\'m impressed. Write another story soon please!
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your Nanny. Best of luck in future postings.
person lysa1
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your story in one reading - all 30 chapters.
I am impressed. First by your courage and your brave fight to write even with your disability. It is not severe in any way, I must say. The story is easy to read, and I have no difficulties to overlook a small error in spelling.

Next: The contents of the story. It is almost a saga, The Weasley Saga. Again I must say that I am impressed. You have a vivid imagination, you describe the characters so one believes in them, and you manage to catch the reader.

It is without no doubt that you are developing your skills as a writer from chapter 1 until you reach the last chapter.

It is a great writer, who makes the reader feel the melancholy and the joy of the main character in the end. I admit it. I cried a little, when I read the last chapter.
Thank you so much for a lovely story.
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, I\'m truly sorry this story had to end since it was so incredibly brilliant, but at least it ended on a good note for Hermione and her family. Definitely want to keep track of you and your future writings. Hope you post soon. Bye! ^_^