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An interesting story with a lot of potential, a pity that you apparently abandoned it.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Cool Story! Please continue soon!

I think this is a really good story and hope you continue soon.

Second Grade Religious studies, what do they say about still waters running deep. LOL. I really like the story so far. And if that is how you teach, I would have liked Religion in school. Secondly, I can hardly wait to find out what she thinks about which Order member they chose for her. I still have three more chapters up ready to be read, but after finding out you teach 2nd grade, I could not resist a review. Good Job.

So now here is sit patiently or should I say Impatiently waiting for the next chapter. Please don\'t make us wait too much longer. It is good. Can\'t wait to see if or how they are going to fall for each other.

Chapter 6: I don\'t know why you aren\'t satisfied with this chapter. I liked it. I think it finally gave a proper depiction of Dumbledore. Everyone loves him, and let\'s face it, he just pisses me off. His high handed way have always made me very angry. The fact that he does what he thinks is right for people is his only saving grace. I really have never liked the way that he has treated Snape, as if Severus was not putting his own life in danger every time he returning to the Dark Lord. Personally I think it would be complete justice if he was able to strike the final blow to Lucius just before the Dark Lord fell at the hands of Harry. But he is another that I have mixed feelings for. I completly dislike Ron most of the time. But that is a whole other story.

Hey, wow that was good. The characterization is really good and the plot is good. I want to find out what happens wit Hermionie and Severus. How will they get along? I hope you update soon because I am dying to read it. It gives me something to look forward too in the cold winter. Lol, keep writing.

Hey, what\'s this about Canada eh?

Ahh! At last someone who cones tes to owning Canada.

But seriously your doing a good job with Snape (I hate it when people make him all warm and fuzzy just out of blue) and no I don't think Hermione is too over the top considering what's happening to her.