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yo, someone like, stole the first part of your story on fanfiction.net, it\'s called \'Your My One and Only Love\' by xo-missy-ox, but this time it\'s a Harry/Hermione pairing. Just wanted you to know.


Great Story by the way.

I never thought of using a silk scarf that way. actually wrapping around your penis, and making love to your partner with it, sound good to me. I loved the way you captured his vulnerability in this fic. It made him seem more human, then monster, like in other fics.

jeannette

excellent work. :) all it needs is a wee bit of beta-ing for those copy/pasted bits that make no sense. half the next word replaces part of the previous and one has to guess.. :p aside from that, I love this fic. *g* well done. :)

This was a marvelous fic! It was so sad but it had a wonderful happy ending. Thanks for the great story.

Gah.... love it.
so sensual, so heartbreaking, and then you managed to give me the happy ending I wanted *Sigh*

Wow! that good,

I love your story. It was so full of emtion. I actually cried for poor Draco. He was like a little lost boy when he was missing Hermione. The sadest part of all was when he was mournfully crying for her after he gave himself an orgasm. I'm glad you gave the story a happy ending. It was just too sad to have him without her.

I hardly ever revue, because you know, I'm a bit of a jerk, but I just had to say.....

OH MY GOD!!!! Make me cry, why don't you! That was an awesome story and it just made me all emotional and girly and all the things I'm usually not. So if you will excuse me I have to go out, buy a dress, rent some romance films, eat ice cream with a girlfriend and completely gush about this phenomenal story of yours.

Keep writing stories.....or I may be forced to kill you.....(that's the regular me!)

Another wonderful fic from you!

What really struck me with this story is your description of Narcissa through Hermione's eyes...Narcissa's characterization fit perfectly with her given name, as if JKR actually was the one who wrote her. It was something different to have Narcissa and Hermione loathing each other, and Narcissa's manipulations causing a rift between Draco and Hermione.

You've also raised erotica to a new level, with your description of Draco masturbating with Dramione-smelling bedsheets.

Thank you for giving this a happy ending. I'm such a sucker for D/Hr and although I welcome the angst, I still want a story where they end up together.

This was really, really good. It had all the elements needed... love, romance, misunderstanding, smut, reunion, a happy ending. It was the whole package. (Oh yeah, the grammar was also good. Nothing to distract from the story.)

You're really good. I look forward to your future works and plan on checking to see if you have anything else already written.

Thanks for writing this.

Cheers!