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for One Night at Grimmauld Place

by 8inchCaliper

person Mandey
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've seen this other places and I must say that I have always loved it; it's one of the best SS/SBs of all time. Very in-character, you know?
person Alex
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a veeeery nice fanfic.Amazing. If it is your first one then... make sure there will be a second!
person MadEyeMax
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erotic elegance? Mmm, that is the perfect way to describe Severus. Severus; rolls off the tongue quite nicely, doesn\'t it?
I think Severus/Alan is quite lovely, but you\'re truly getting me all hot for him now. Nicely done.
person .
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sirius is canonically taller than Snape, per the confrontation between the two in the kitchen in Grimmauld Place. (You know you're a canon whore when you correct things like that in smut...)
person richhairyguy
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was very good and very well written!
Height made no difference to me, and I consider myself a big reader of this genre.

Also, I had no problem with the conjoined paragraphs as this seems to be your style - and a very good one. It was descriptive, and tender (using your own word) and i also enjoyed the Snarry's you've written!
Very good - for your first forray!

rhg
person Crossbow
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I think it's really sweet, in a not-so sweet way. I'm surprised it's your first. Good job!