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by shelia

person To-To Kama Mae
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy turn on a stick! Im sure you hear this all the time...since I try to consider myself a regular reader of yours having read other stories that you have written. But hot damn. This is really good. I mean...wow...its like a sort of ...less is more kinda thing..but not too little...just enough..its great...I love it and I love you. Heeheee.The best. Simply the best. Good and very excellent job. Double Kook with knobs!
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely and creepy. Very nice Halloween reading, actually. When I read it, I thought you must have written it after Half-Blood Prince was released, but the dates say otherwise.
person gotsnape
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore castrated my Potions Master?!? I'll KILL him! Very intense and disturbing, especially since as a fifth year, the girl is only what, 14--15 at the most? That made me very uncomfortable. Did you intend for her to be this young or did you just miscalculate? Will there be more of this story set in later years? Please let me know. I have your bio page bookmarked and come here often for a good read.
person lizski
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!!