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for A Boy Named 'Harry'

by HeyDarlin

person heyy13
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ish shaking slightly from sobbs* I know what he is going through... I went throught it at a younge age... This is brilliatly writen and i comend you on how its done.. Didnt help i was already realy depressed when i started reading this.. *half smiles* But its beautyfully writen. And convays harrys emotions so perfectly... Its realy well done and i would love for you to continue with the story so i can see if it has a happy ending like mine did. *smiles gracefully and uses a tissue to blow her nose and wipe her face clean from tears* You have a realy nice style and are extreemly proficent at convaying emothers throughout the story... Sory if im being sappy but its realy realy sad. *smiles*

I commend you greatly and come bearing a bag of cookies. *i smile and hand them to you* I hope you continue writing and dont forget about the story again... (lol)

Luffle it, heyy13
person Deevine
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read, I wept, I longed to take this boy into my arms and protect him, I got to the last chapter and screamed obscenities that there was not more to read.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is he going to try to die?
hope you update soon
person sydney
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! When your done typing, could you read over what you've written to check for mistakes, it's a little confusing sometimes. Thanks!
person Serpentis
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gimme more! :-) I can't wait for an update!
I want to find out what happens.

Serpentis
person Greenlizard
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this story is one of test est Harry Potter fictions I have ever read. The concern shown from Professor Snap and Draco Malfoy over Harry
person Tasha
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. I think it's really well written.
person Karasu8
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I hope you continue soon. ^_______^ Poor Harry...

~Karasu8~
person Arisu
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaaahhhhh! Keep writing! keep writing!
person yami990
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue.