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for What he wants

by Afterfire

person anonymous
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cool ! Keep updating!
person Rain
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you can't just leave it like that. Please continue soon!
person Maya
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was bloody awsome, so darn cute. Lovely work!
person slytherinswn
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Well that went well" , LOL I love that line . It will be interesting to see where you go with this .
person viz
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter please!!! I'm biting my nails in anticipation for more.
person MySecretsOut
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoOoO....very interesting! I like it a lot keep up the great work! till next time cheers!
person ancientgirl
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was very cute. LOL, I loved his last line "Well that went well" I can't wait for your next chapter. Does she feel teh same way about him? I hope so.
person FuMan Skeeto
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice start. a little work on the spelling, though.

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