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for What he wants

by Afterfire

person joanna
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious!
person joanna
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is even funnier and a bit sweet on Draco's part.
person joanna
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The sex scene was good. Hermione is so lucky!
person joanna
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He does sound like a stalker. Ooh! I can't wait for the next chapter! Your story is excellent!
person Samantha[not signed in]
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was great for your first sex scene. mine wasn't half as good. keep up the good work, i can't wait for your next update.
person blondiexoxo
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i love it so far i really hope that u update really soon
person adri
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you did a great job.
person mina
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would say an Update is looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong over due! OG COURSE I want you to update!! I would love it so please continue!!!!
person Liz
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, what can I say...just love the story. Really waited for this update and hope the next comes soon!

Besides...the sex scene was not akward!

xxx
person Stag
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it! You put in my favorite element: Jealous Draco. That...that's just sexy. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. *holds up hands* More please. :)