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for What he wants

by Afterfire

person sanaa
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheh nice chap great start
person sanaa
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! omg i can just about Hermione's embarrassment - i wud die if my parents came over and found a guy there update soon plz
person joanna
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Luv the conversations between John and Helen Granger. They were fabulous!
person samantha [not signed in]
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lolz, thank you for e-mailing me. and yes you are right, i have to go to work tomorrow, which is my birthday, lolz. anyways this chapter is excellent and i can't wait for the next one.
person Given2Fly
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeheehee....I love the way Hermione's mum is setting her da straight! Although, the OOCness that I'm feeling from Draco is a bit weird, I must say. Lovely chapter, dear and I can't wait til the next update! Keep up the good work!
person shalamonde16 aka lala
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautifulyl done. I couldn't help but chuckle at the irnoy, at the awkwardness of it all... LOL

good job and keep 'em comin...
person Samantha[not signed in]
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmao, poor draco and hermione. lolz. i wonder what her uncle is going to tell the family. Anyways this was great. Please update soon. Hermione is very irrtable in this story, lolz, much like me. I 'm still in shock that he told her uncle that. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!!! E-Mail me at DaOnLeeSam@Yahoo.Com when you do, because i have no idea how to log into this new aff.net.
person skye
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heehee.....oh this is a goody! but as much as Hermione's going to fuss, her Uncle *did* let Draco in........
person Stag
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco's a bastard, ain't he? HAHAHAHAHA

Nice chapter but I'd like longer one in your next update. I'm enjoying the fic!
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved the uncle bit.