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for What he wants

by Afterfire

schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kat
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome story, I had to laugh at Hermione's parents! Too true for parents of a siingle child!!! HA HA HA
person joanna
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was longer and a bit boring. Lunch was awkward and nothing really interesting happens beside Hermione's hicky. That was embarassing. So where is this story going? I mean, what happnes now?
person Redlightspin
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it it's funny
person sanaa
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe omg imagine Draco Malfoy eating with his fingers oh my hilarious.........nice chap keep em coming...oooh i like the possessive thing Draco had going- i mean they're not even together
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Abso-Positively Delish! Please update soon! PleasePleasePlease!
person Given2Fly
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco coming out from his father's shadow and being a bit OOC makes sense. ;)

I particularly liked the part where he started eating his chips with his fingers and looked like a little boy who was sneaking cookies before dinner! LoL I could SO picture that.

Keep up the good work, poppet!
person tank
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just started reading this story and i really enjoy how draco and hermione interact, i also find the arkwardness in the relationship to be refreshing. Please keep writing!
person shalamonde16 aka lala
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"She watched as Draco set his fork aside and picked up a chip gingerly between two fingers and bit into it, his face tight. He finished the chip and then reached for another one with a smile that made him look as though he were sneaking a cookie out of the cookie jar before dinner instead of eating chips with his fingers."

LOL

This chappie absolutely cracked me up.

I needed it too, especially after reading a dramione fic earlier that left me feeling... I dunno... empty? hollow? any word you can think of synonymous to a state beyond the point of sadness and regret/grief... enough with the theatrics...

no, but really I liked this chapter. it made me feel better.
ps.. I realize I'm babbling...sorry.. ahehehe
person Stag
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked your characterization of Hermione's parents - they really seemed English. I don't get that in a lot of fics. It's becoming really promising.