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for 14 Days

by AureliaFlint

person lumen1
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
day 11 review:


wow that medea is sure one little vixen, she sure likes her sexual encounters real rough!!! poor marcus, he has really fallen for the little ravenclaw. i imagen that all these emotions are truly new to him. the good thing, well, in my opinion, is that he feels guilty for cheating on her
person lumen1
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
day 12 review:


lovely how they reconciled!!! that is one of the great thing after a big fight with your love one
person lumen1
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
day 13 review:


i really like it when the boys chat!!!! this one was so funny though, it was hilarious when Adrian told marcus in a form of an insult that he was behaving like a hufflepuff with persephone ha ha ha but what really cracked me up was the comment that terry made to marcus
person lumen1
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
day 14 review:

ha ha ha ha ha so that is how it happened, how our most beloved tart from hogwarts end up kissing the all mighty oliver wood LOL!!!!! the funny thing is that he wanted to keep going ha ha ha ha, thank the gods that adrian was there for the rescue;)

oh, that adrian
person lumen1
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
epilogue review:

so that is why their relationship didn
person Shannon
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! I loved it!! Great job! I look forward to the 6 months after and hope we will see a new chapter for Luciest Man On Earth, soon!
person rubberduck
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's almost over eh? sigh, that's so sad. your characters are amazing and i really like to read about their adventures. those three guys are so smooth. wish i had their charm lol. i'm eager to find out how marcus and persephone end things. i almost figured it would end with this chapter. my mistake. it was so hot with adrian and helena. what a quickie!
person jo
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay thanx i'm happy did this little prequel or w/e haha it kool! keep up the good work! :D
person rubberduck
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
persephone isn't going to give in easily eh? good for her. make marcus work. i like the fact that it seems marcus is falling for persephone, but we all know he doesn't stay with her. it's just the thrill of the hunt. and persephone is seeing the deeper man underneath the slytherin exterior. that's a nice touch. quite the picture of marcus there. lol so that's your inspiration. very interesting.
person lumen1
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
day 7 review:

poor marcus!!! he must really like persephone inorder to wait for her to be good and ready. the good thing is that in the process, mr. marcus doesn't waist any time and is teaching his little ravenclaw the arts of oral pleasure;) ahhh, even though i'm enjoying immensely the coupling of marcus with persephone, i must say that when marcus makes a little comments about katie bell my heart skips a beat of enjoyment;)

excellent drabble, waiting eagerly for the next one;)

lumen1