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for Inside Your Mind

by forfun

person Anon
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it
hope you update really soon
could you fix ch7 too?
it got cut off
person Fawkes
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, just thot id let u kno this is brilliant! iv read up 2 chap 7 in 1 sitting bt i think theres sum sorta problem with the chapter coz its incomplete. iv tried reloading it bt i only ever get a few lines. do u think u cood email me the chapter so i can read it? thanx. aside from that problem, i think the story's gr8. i think uv dealt with the whole "enemies 2 more than friends" thing really well & i think uv managed 2 come up with a plausible story 4 that change. keep writing! luv Fawkes :o) xxx
person Mewa
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! u updated! i liked the chapter!! lovely! cant wait until u update again!
person abby
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, i really love this fan fic, but when i try to read chapter 7 it only comes up as about a paragraph of writing. is this how its supposed to be? cuz in the later chapters it kind of feels like i'm missing something....... still really good. -abby
person Draco stalker
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just love you story
it's sooo sweet
please update so i can perv.. i mean see my sweet Draco
person Rosch
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.k. Lucius Malfoy being nice. am i the only one being freaked out here. though i suppose that it would make a nice change. there are too many stories, where lucius threatens draco, and he breaks up with harry because of it. please update soon.
person eve/roarke
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, completely worth waiting for.

As for the teachers and school, you really must listen to all you are taught, then do your homework.

Then write the most important works, your fanfics.
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lucius lied? He might turn to the light now. Can't wait for more!
person kalyn
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update pleeaase! I love your st ory so much ^_^

xXPEACEXx
person Mewa
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lmao too funny at the end! That was such a good come back from hermione!! X-D I cant wait till u write more