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for Inside Your Mind

by forfun

person kazhdu
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Love the story, it\'s full of steamy sex, witty dialogues, humour that is actually funny and surprising twists.
i think - no, I am sure - that I will archive this in my personnal library, keep on reading it until the end and look out for any other fic you
might have written!

On a less praisy note: Bellatrix was never in Azkaban after the Ministry battle. She ran out of the veil room and Harry followed her. Then Voldemort
(my private nickname for him is snake-dude, because it sounds so ridiculous that I can just imagine him having a fit hearing it) came and they duelled some.
Dumbledore (and Fawkes) joined in and saved Harry. V tried to possess H but got driven away by luv. Just as Fudge and other ministry employees arrived he
disapparated with Bellatrix.
Second remark : Why does Severus need potions to lie to V ? It makes his occlumency (which is supposed to be one of the bests and the only reason he can be
a spy) kind of useless, doesn\'t it? Why not make Lucius an equally talented Occlumens instead ?

More praisy note: I like the fact that you haven\'t made all your guys Calvin Klein models with huge dicks. Too many authors do that already, and while i enjoy sexy
fanfics (slash or het, it doesn\'t matter as long as there is Draco or Severus, I just love the dark and snarky types!) I\'m starting to actually look forward to seeing
someone with a small dick for a change!!! Kidding aside, I think you\'re on the top list of sexy sex writers (yes I do mean sexy sex, sometimes I read fics that
actually manage to make sex disgusting or ridiculous and that\'s just scary!)

Hope to read you soon

Ciao!
person Doomanator (to lazy to log in)
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD. !!!!! it\'s.. I mean... That\'s just... OH. MY. GOD!!! That is so origanal it blows my mind. I mean, just reading her last entry is enough to know about Draco, oh my god! Thats horrible! Imagine the angst poor Draco is going to go through! *cry* I have to exspress my undieing love for you! This is an awsome fic, totaly original, well written and eventful, i can not wait until the next chapter!
person yana
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!!!!!!!!!
more please!!!!
person ran
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowza i\'d have to say this is the best harry/draco story i have read yet. Its just tooo kawaii!! I love it and all the mystery! please keep up the good work,
person smurf
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, i no i JUST reviewed like 2 seconds ago, but I was reading some of the other reviews and OMG! is draco lucius\'s HALF BROTHER!!!!???? That would be SUCH a plot twist its not even funny!
person Mewa
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! dracos grandfather is probably his daddy also! O.O holy...thats wowness....cant wait until the next update now!
person Eowynselixure
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JESUS CRHIST! that was wow! plz plz plz update soon.

*Eowyns elixure
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Is Draco Lucius\' half brother? Oh I can\'t wait for the next chapter! What happens next?
person typied
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually put this in a \"Finished Stories\" folder on my computer because it took you so long to put 17 up. Now I must insist that you hurry up with 18. It\'s cruel and unusual punishment to leave all of us hanging. :)
person risssta
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue!!!