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for Inside Your Mind

by forfun

person R
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I was so excited when I saw that you updated again!! The next chr sor sounds like it's going to be fun!!! Keep up the awesome work and PLEASE update soon!!!!
person aj
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do realise how utterly evil that was, right? The only reason you are not in any kind of pain at the moment, is cuz I really wanna read the sex part and unfortunatly i have to wait. You evil whore. :-P

AJ
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Everyone was outed at the table! I'm so glad that every couple was accepted! And now Harry's ready! I loved chapter 10! Can't wait for more!
person EvilAngel69
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo me likes the story. please include some herm/ron soon along w/ the rest of thot. ot. n snape walkin in of harry n draco was classic. however snape n lupin do make a suprising couple. i luv it please update soon!!!!!! ^__^
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM

My. What a well-written story. I like the concept of them inside each other's heads and the bonding they share. Most interesting tale you've spun. Nice work.

regards--



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person eve/roarke
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.K. I lyouryour story, I loved your concept and the being able to read each others mind was possibly delicious, however
the moment had arrived they had a cunning blackmail issue which they could persue (think of the wonderful pictures of making Snapes prepare Draco for Potter or getting Lupin getting Harry ready for Malfoy) the plots are endless, but instead you bring
in Zabini and Finnegan! Why!!! perhaps we will never know HOPEFULLY, Still the scene is set they arrive at the destination finally it's going to happen for real and HARRY is tired, have you seen Malfoy!!!!! He could shag me to death and I would not conseed.
But the final insult you then was th Sex God of harry potter agreeds he's tire too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!its depressing just thinking about it. However I forgive you if you update and have my boys enjoying themselves soooooooooooooooooooooooon.

Still deserves 5 stars because even though I disagree with the content, the story is still
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 10! Seamus and Blaise! Snape and Remus! Holy moly!
person G.S.
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah!! you including my second OTP of Remu/Severus!! (first is obviously Harry/Draco) le woot!! keep updating, now! lol im so lame, and i used way to many exclamation points.
person rwalaer
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooo good !!!!! Can't wait to hear Snapes reply to Harry. I love the way Draco and Harry tease each other in their minds. Please update soon.
person Brie Kinney
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story thi think it is genius. Can't wait for the next update!

xox Brie xox