rate_review Reviews

oh man such a sad story, i just started reading s/l stories and there are only a few good ones i bumped into this one included... anyway such a lovely story.

It was ok . . . I think you really made Sirius way too OOC for my tastes . . he's just not like that.
And Snape . . . er . . . yeah .

Wow, I like this and I didnt think I would. Have you converted me to Lucius/Severus??? I have no sympahty for Sirius, whom is one of my favourite characters, you make his situation belivable. Keep up the good work, look forward to reading more!

I have to wonder at the setup for this story: *why* exactly would Sirius Black, the kid who runs away from his family partially because they were pureblood supremacists, be interested in Lucius Malfoy, the man who marries his cousin and is the embodiment of such ideas? That\'s not even to mention that canonically, Lucius is about/at least five years older than Black and Snape, which makes his extremely close proximity to either of them more than a little unlikely. I guess you can label that all as \'AU\' and do what you want, but I don\'t recognize any of the original characters\' personalities in this story. Why not just change the names--it would fit better.

I like your fic alot, but I was just hoping that you could maybe make Lucius love Severus sicerely, I just really want someone who loves him, he just seems like he deserves it.