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for Crush of the Black Silk Boxers

by FatalSuccubus

person Katie K
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Please continue
person CMM
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know what's on that parchment!!!!!! -childish sobbing-
person Lychee
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you could put a space between paragraphs it would make it a little easier on the eyes to read. Just a small suggestion from the over thirty crowd (old eyes, ya know? ^_^)
person Lychee
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. You're right, Snape's more in character in chapter two. Not that he was that OOC in the first one, not really. Anyway, please continue. Thanks!
person relicwitch
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the two cap a lot!
I don't thing there is any oocness.Afterall even Sev is human ;)
I can only hope that you can update soon enough.
Bye.
person Greeneye$
schedule April 11, 0000 at 12:00 AM
I realllllllllllllllllly do like this so far and I can not wait for more.....

Shelley