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June 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far Please update :-) really want to know were this is going :-D
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You had a very good plotline but, the story was a bit all over the place. This wasn't even that much of an adult fanfiction it was more like a kids fanfiction with cuss words put in. Please learn proper english you have way too many mispellings and mistakes. Next time use spellcheck or have a beta check it. Or even better take the time to read what you're doing! i may not have anything done on heere because I just made my account today but still this story was jacked up. I know what a good story is I go onto fanfiction.net they have better stories than you do trust me. Why don't you go make an account on that site and get some pointers and tips from the members of the site they'll help you and point you in the right direction and trust me this isn't that bad of a review on one of my stories someone wouldn't stop cussing at me in it so just be glad I didn't cuss at you.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you update this soon I love it ...its great snarry lovin in the best form keep up the great job your doing ;)
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have you given up on your stories? i hope not, please update. if you update, i would love an email to know that you are continuing these stories.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like this hey r u going to have sex scenes in here?!?! say YES please lol ok anyway... may u please e-mail me when u update!?!?!? PLEASE so i no when u do please............................. PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT !!!!!!! ^__~ Keep going pwezzzzz
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG haha chapter 7 has to be the funniest thing ever invented!! Laughed sooo hard (where did that honey idea come fromhehe)!! Love the story can\'t wait for more and I hope your wit doesn\'t fail you since the story\'s got me laughing!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, delicious. Snape covered in sticky sweetness. What more can one ask for? Oh yes, the permission to lick it off. ;)
More please? :D
More please? :D
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooo! I LOVE this! Please update soon! When you do e-mail me notifying me of this please and thank you.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goodness this is hysterical!! I loved the honey scene! *delicious* ha ... ooh please update