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for Tequila

by tallulahbell

person fragonknight01
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Snape is believeable. If people give you shit just point out that tough guys often have reverse symptoms when suffering from post traumatic stress syndrome. I hope you don't make this too angsty. I happen to be one of those people who don't have an angsty life and actually enjoy the sunshine, flowers, fresh cut grass and feeding the sqirrels so that they vandalize the neighbors yards and not mine.
person Shaddow
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can u have someone hit harry over the head with a baseball bat. THAT IDIOTIC CHILD!!!! SCREW HIM
person procyon
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGH~ no angst please T_T it started off nicely and I like the lightheartness (is that a word?) of chapter 1&2, but 3 seems like a different fic.. I dunno..
person aliciamasters
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, it can still be a PWP with a sprinkle of angst. I like the idea that there will be a plot here; I enjoyed the setup of the conflict. I hope you don't steer away for the spicy sensuality of the first two chapters, though; they really caught my attention. Thanks for posting sicklickly!
person Katie K
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love this, love this, love this, love this, love this, and love you for writing it. Please update soon!
person crudedly
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes well... *cough* looking forward to a bit more background information. Like, Harry a bit more shocked, and Snape a bit more panicked that he just bedded his student. Otherwise, it's nice. ;-)
person Lychee
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whaaahhh!!! More...please...getting weak...need smut.... Okay, seriously though update as soon as you can, okay? I need to know why Snape wasn't nearly as confused, horrified or embarrassed as Harry was. Please, I gotta know.
person Danielle
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its good! Thoroughly enjoying the story, Snape isnt Snarky enough! Also why where they drinking so heavily and enough to forget the event of the previous night?
person Lychee
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I'm not sure about the whole Snape weeping like a baby thing but I do like Harry being blissfully unaware that while he thinks he's done tightight thing he has in fact just fucked up. Keep going, we're reading! ^_^
person Lychee
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oi! feckin tease! *holds out hands, bats big puppy eyes at author* "More please..."