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for Tequila

by tallulahbell

schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha. I can't believe that they do not have this site blocked on our school's computers. I am glad that it isn't. *smiles* I was just checking if you added a new chapter yet. It's study hall. rawr. I just finished my french homework. yippie! Actually, i copied someones. I am a bad person i know. I know I'm impatient but a story as good as this and that cliffhanger you left us with warrants a bit of impatience. Keep up the good work.
person barbarataku
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry seems inadequate about your 7 months in plaster, but you must be doing better if you feel like writing. This chapter only seems different to you because the seriousness of the chapter has changed. This confrontation was inevitable because Draco and Harry have not had a chance to get to know each other. Harry and Sev have a history of conflict tinged with him helping Harry. Harry and Draco have a history of juvenile conflict. They have really had no chance to work it out.
person Isadax
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So what ? More please.
I thought that Harry would do something 'like going to Draco). Just hiding in his bed is ooc don't you think ? But, nevermind, I like your story.
person Tash
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
to me that would be the best god damn cliffhanger there ever was. when is the next chap????? dieing to know!!!!!!!!.......Tash
person Fangyuzhe
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so awesome~_~.
person BP
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated!!!! This is the best!!! Poor Harry! XD And Sev too! There's a mad hermione on the prowl... or rather the war path! LOL.
person shelagh
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I am glad to hear you are better after your accident. I rolled a Jeep last year and spent a month in the hospital so I know what you mean, sometimes it takes a minute or two to get back in the swing of things. I don't see a huge difference in your writting style. Great job and glad to see you are back.
person Aurora Jezebel
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am truely sorry to hear about your accident. I hope you are or will be better soon. Hopefully, it will lift your spirts to know that I love your story and eagerly await your updates. I don't review many stories. The reviews I do post probably consist about 1% of the stories I read. Your fiction compelled me to post a review and let you know that your lastest chapter is constant with the past chapters and you are doing a great job. Thank-you.
person BP
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH BUGGER! I WAS GETTING ALL MUSHY MOO AND NOW HARRY GOES AND ACTS LIKE AN ARSE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! OH GOD I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY, AND I'M GLAD YOU DECIDED TO UPDATE. SERIOUSLY, YOU ARE A GREAT AUTHOR! By the way, I'm sorry about the accident, I hope you're feeling better now. I also really apreciate your updating, although you hadn't been well. You must be truly dedicated to this story. Good luck with the next chappie, and btw, the style of writing was absolutely fine! Hope I haven't driven you mad with my ranting! XD
person JJ
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a turn-around!!! I can understand Snape's realization that he was putting Harry on a pedastil being somewhat disheartening, but for him to question everything makes me think he's not so bright. Why the complete turnaround? Yes, when you first fall in love you want the other to be perfect. But the realization that the other is not perfect is liberating. You love the whole person or at least tolerate them. Wouldn't perfection be impossible all the time? Now he learns the Harry is only human; newsflash - we all are. And he said Harry's only 17! That's a lot of growing and learning still going on. After all, Harry is still learning to be who he will grow into and testing out all the possibilities. For Snape to discard everything is unreasonable; he wants perfection or nothing??? I wonder how you're going to solve this dilema.