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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this was good. ive read it before elsewhere and im glad i got to read it again. its one of my favorites, although there is a few spelling mistakes that you might want to look at, so as to make it an even better read.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooo cool its the bome thanks
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The stripping might help actually. Personally I thought it was great. Keep up the good work.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this and I hope you keep writing. And the stripping would be very welcomed!
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah awesome! ony 3 reviews?? and shitty ones!! some people are insane. this made me so wet and horny. w bac back in your story or here as a review if you wanna get together, of just cyber.
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...that was so good! OMG, my nipples are rock-hard right now, and I am soo wet.
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic needs a *ton* of work. And by a "ton" I mean delete this whole thing and start over from scratch. The spelling is atrocious, the number of typos is inexcusable, and the descriptions are horrible. Example: "Ginny grabbed all of Hermione and hugged her tight, their skin stuck together like it was meant to be." Are you kidding me? I would just like to say for all of us... "Ick." Since I would like to end this on a positive note, let me say that I like the title. Keep that. Dump everything else.
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic but some speling thing here and there and it sould raet nc-17