rate_review Reviews

This is a fabulous story. You capture the desperation, tenderness, tragedy and caring superbly. I really like that it is Remus that forces the issue. And that Draco, although very much a Black, is more then Sirius' shadow. Too bad that Remus is unable to see that. The raw energy if this fic is great.
Just Wonderful.

WOW! that was great! it was catchy! i hope u arent stopping there...continueing would be awesome

I just love this story! it was one of those that I couldn't stop reading untill the end. I thought Draas was writing the words on the head boards but now it looks like it was Hermione. Great job! :)

Wow! I loved it! The plot is orginial, and the characters are perfect. The war, the desperation......all combine to make the story so bittersweet! I loved how it ended, yet I still want to beg for a continuing fic. Any chance of that happening?

About the relationships: Hermione and Draco were amazingly matched in this fic. I loved Remus' description of Sirius and their time together. I really liked how differently you presented the Hermione and Ron match --- it was interesting to read about them not being perfect together despite their love.

Very well done.

pir8fancier,

If you haven't been invited yet, I wanted to invite you to join:
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/quietones

"It's Always the Quiet Ones" is a free, active yahoo community for people whom like any of the following pairings: DM/HG, DM/BZ, HG/BZ, or DM/HG/BZ. They accept any story, regardless of rating, for any of those four pairings. The group was founded August 2 of this year, and in a little over a month we already have 455 members! I'm not a moderator or anything like that, I'm pretty much a semi-lurker, but I wanted to let you know about the site in case you wanted to share this story with even more people bec because youa gra great writer. The reader response is always very good over there, plus we have several amazing authors you might enjoy reading.


Feel free to head over to the offical IAtQO archive to check out a few stories already archived, if your not in the mood to join, but want to reagoodgood D/Hr (or any of thee other three pairings) fic. There is slash content in the Draco and Blaise pairing, because...Blaise Zabini is a boy. Anyway, the site is found at http://www.quietones.org/

Have fun! : )
eowynldy.

This was beyond brilliant! It was rec'd in my yahoo community, Quiet Ones, and I had to read it. The characterizations were amazing. You have a beautiful way with words and I feel honored to have read this! Would you consider submitting it to be archived at It's Always the Quiet Ones? http://quietones.org. It's just one of the best D/Hr fics I've read in a while and I'd love if we could archive it at the site.

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story! Hope to see more from you soon!

Inell

Great story! The relationship between the two main characters unfolded credibly and gloriously.
The sex was divine and the war plot amazing. Kudos to you for a well thought-out and exquisitely written fic.

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damn.

that's all that came out of me when i finished reading this. i hope to read more from you soon... and please... if you're not there already, join IAtQO, like eowynldy said... i'm sure they'd all appreciate this there...

ChristiAna

Wow! It's so cool to read a real, adult story (and not "adult" in merely the porn sense), one that really makes one think. You gave Hermione and Draco grown-up emotions, depth, and interest without making them OOC. She really belongs with Draco at the end because he's the only one who actually understands her. He "feels her pain" in a way that Ron never will, much as he may be well-meaning, the big doofus. I think Remus was trying to diminish Hermione's feelings for Draco by implying that he's merely really attractive and not that he fills an essential need in her life (and IMO Hermione is just as important to the Order as Ron is, so what keeps her happy is critical too). She probably shouldn't have gone so long stringing out Ron, but I can see how it would be difficult for her to back out now, with them all living together and needing to work together to save the world from evil. Maybe she could get away from Ron gradually, starting by having her own room. Anyway, I know it doesn't matter (it's just FICTION!), but I do tend to get carried away with a story sometimes, and that's a good thing!

I hope you are writing more HP stories (maybe something more cheerful next time). I look forward to reading your future work.

Wow! I love your writing style. Blunt and somewhat straightforward... But not to the point where some things aren't left for us to mull over. All in all, that was beautiful... You captured her situation petly.tly. I feel like I can almost sympathize with Hermione over her montage of emotions, and I say "almost" because I've never had experience anything as profound. I had an inkling of a hunch that it was one of the involved parties that was disecrating the hotel property. Bloody brilliant, this was!

This is an excellent fic I don't know why it hasn't gotten more hits. I loved the unspoken things with the headboards and how it took so long before they could speak their real feelings for each other. I know why Hermione doesn't leave Ron and why she stays in the shadows with Draco. Dare I hope that this will be continued or is it just a one shot?