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OMG... That was powerful. Are you SURE you can't make a continuation? I understand it's a one shot, but that doesn't mean there can't be a follow up. Please? That fic was too great to just be a one shot. Great work.

oh wow. this...
so beautiful, so sad... and yet there's hope there, at the end...

wow.

Well, then. This must be the one of the most intelligent and erotic fics between Hermione and Draco that I have ever read. Thank you so much.

That was the best story ever. I have never read one like this. I do hope you write more storys!
I love the way you write!

I saw this recced somewhere so thought I'd take a look -- and I'm glad I did. You did a really nice job with the story. The desperation of needing to have something -- or someone -- to cling to in a time of war to stop yourself going insane was very clear all the way throughout, and my heart ached for Hermione, Draco *and* Ron, because they were all suffering in their own way. Great story!

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant. I don't know how else to describe this. It's raw and the emotions are flowing like molten lava. I had a hunch that it was one of them who was vanadalizing the hotel property. I understand why Hermione can't leave Ron, but it isn't making her happy and it isn't enough. I love how their feelings slowly progressed, from just the simple need for fucking to companionship...and I hope eventually, love.

Part of me wants this to have a sequel but another part would be happy if you leave it like this. But then, I'm curious. I would love to know how it all ends. Good job! Hope to read more fics from you.

Don't tell me it's over. It can't possibly be over

Good job !

Wow. This story is simply amazing.

While I often prefer fluffy!Dramione stories, this story, however dark the undertones, has affected me in more ways. I thought about it all day today and will likely re-read it. If your other readers hadn't already done so, I would have done my part in pimping it to various groups as well.

I like the development of Draco and Hermione's relationship and the cause for its beginning is plausible. I love the psychological basis of it. I like how you told part of their story through the words on the headboard. I like how you left the last word unsaid.

Your description of why Hermione's relationship with Ron is bound to fail is precisely why I don't ship Ron/Hermione. For once, it focuses less on Hermione and Ron not being intellectual equals, and more on Ron always being in someone's shadows. I like the subtlety of Draco's jealousy or Ron and Hermione's relationship; the way you described it without the usual blow ups and dramatics speaks volumes.

I like how you brought in Remus's werewolf abilities in confronting Draco and Hermione about their relationship and I like how Remus/Sirius is juxtaposed with Draco/Hermione.

Much as I would love to have a sequel to this, I'm not going to ask for one because the story is beaul thl the way you left it, much like you left out the last carved word. I would, however, strongly encourage you to write more Draco/Hermione stories. PLEASE?

that was sooooo good, is it just a one off or are you goign to write more.
i really liked the way it flowed, you seem to kno how to do this so well
wonderful story now im going to go check if you have any other stories on aff.net

I liked.