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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story and Very hot!
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh cmon, ur not seriousli jus endin it there r u?
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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, all right! Way to go, Hermione!! This fic is definitely going to need finishing - it's a great idea. My only suggestion would be that as you write it, you could expand on this chapter some more, perhaps getting into internal dialogue, motivation, reactions, etc. More build-up, in other words. But it is very good as is. Thanks!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. This is a great start. Very hot. Please post more soon.
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there is more to this. Great story. He must have been really drunk of really turned on to have just let her go with it, but I hope he doesn't get angry at her.