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by gingermagic

person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To be truthful story line is done often as I'm sure you know. But listen now But I like the way you have taken it and made changes to fit how you want it to. A lot better then the ones were he a girl but doesn't know are that kind of junk. I like it lot and can't wait to read more. You're style seems to be true to yourself and where you're not trying to copy anyone elses. Keep up the good work.
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person S.O.
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
huh. Are you going to have more chapters after this? You should probably invest some time in checking your spelling and grammer before you post another chapter though.
Sounds like an interesting take on the Harry is a girl plot line. I would like to see where this is going.