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for A Bedtime Veela Treatment

by Armand

person Zyx
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but what did she pick up from the foot of the bed?
person Alcatras
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should continue this fic.
person Iluvdis
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this story is SO perfect! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! SEQUEL!!! Come on man, EVERYBODY IS DEMANDING IT!!! You are too good to leave us hangin here with just this. It is good, no, BETTER than good, but it leads to so much MORE!!!
person Big Fan
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should seriously make a sequel, where Harry will visit the Delacours in France or something. I'd like for the three to have much, much more fun together.
person topgon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made me jack it.


Mission Success.
person wes
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly hot
person C.C.
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...this must be the single best Harry Potter Lemon I have EVER read. And I mean it. Seriously, you should make a sequel, with this same pairing. Only, not in his dream state. I don\'t know, perhaps he is feeling terrible at home with the Dursleys cause Sirius is dead or something, and he wants to leave there, but the weasley\'s can\'t take him, so Fleur and her sister decide to invite him. Fleur is old enough to live alone, sister visits, and Bill (or was it Charly) is NOT bussy with her like that (it was said that the one working for Gringots had been seeing Fleur, but I just can\'t see that) so the poor bloke just has a crush or something. I don\'t know...just please, PLEASE write something. Your superb writing and this divine coupling, why nothing could possibly beat that. Consider this a sort of chalenge.
person chaos kitsune chan
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot
now let me find the bottme half of my jaw
person Will
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Freakin\' hell, that rocked! Fleur, oh my god but not only that but a developed Gabrielle. Sweet Jesus, that was hot. If you ever write a sequel to this...this art, let me know. Or even if you write a new fic, they have been great so far.

Thanks,
W.E
person kelley
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, and I have enjoyed many of your tohers. Will you be writing more of this story or was it a one-shot? I would love to read more more harry/ Fleur, Harry/ Gabrielle or stories with all three of them igf you think or writing anymore.