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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THis is actually not bad. Severous can actually be pretty cool and I hope he treats hermione well. I like the way he stood up for her. That was pretty great. Hermione's father was a real jerk. Keep writing
--anonamous
--anonamous
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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH This is great!!!!! I love Sev, and it is all 'cause of you. I can undertand that Hermione's father lost it a bit. It is understanddable. It is sad that Ron died but I can see where it was necessary. There was no way this story would work if he was in it. I am really really REALLY getting curious about Sev. The remake about muggles that he made is making me wonder what happened in hte past. I am thinking that there is history to those remarks. I do love that he kissed Hermione and that he was gentle even when he was obviously pissed off. I could rant about how much I love this fict for a couple of pages I am sure but for now I will just bow to you for your wonderful stories. I look forward to reading more. :)
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
agggggghhhhhhh, the sexual tension is killing me! i just read all your chapies in one sitting, too glued to even go
to bed when i know i need to get up early in the morning. so, i demand some sort of release! well not really demand,
but ask pretty please, with a cherry on top, let there be a sex scene soon? your fic is a emerald in a sea of cubic zerconia
fan fics. xoxo
to bed when i know i need to get up early in the morning. so, i demand some sort of release! well not really demand,
but ask pretty please, with a cherry on top, let there be a sex scene soon? your fic is a emerald in a sea of cubic zerconia
fan fics. xoxo
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright... I will say this one time only....
Wow!
well... I'll probably say it again, but... wow!
Please please please update soon!! This is surprisingly in characterven ven the situation and it's also very well written! Please continue soon, I hate waiting!
Wow!
well... I'll probably say it again, but... wow!
Please please please update soon!! This is surprisingly in characterven ven the situation and it's also very well written! Please continue soon, I hate waiting!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10 - maybe I'm strange, but I really liked it when Severus got all defensive and called Mr Granger "Muggle" and threatened him. He really is protecting Hermione, their engagement was forced on them, and he certainldn'tdn't deserve Mr Granger's violent reaction. Especially when Hermione had already made her decision. I'm looking forward to the wedding! I hope Mrs Granger at least attends.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! There are no words to describe the greatness of this story. Besides, I'm outta words... =D
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You never disappoint. What a scene I could really see him groping her in front of her father just to tick him off. Thanks
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a stellar chapter! please update soon!!!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea, Yea, Yea!!! this was great, almost worth the two month wait, although I do hope it wont be another two months before then next chapter. Good job, ashley
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for posting, great story so far. Lets get to the hotness...