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for Tying Knots

by LadyTuesday

person MrsDeLay
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have only today read any of this story, I am very much enjoying it and I do hope you will continue it soon. I am very anxious to see how this all works out. Thank you for all your hard work. I hope to see more soon!!
person Carine
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,Ladytuesday,
this chapter was absolutely great.It was both so beautifull and sad.When I read the section of the rememberance of the dead housefellows,I couldn't stop the tears running down my face.(I know I'm just too sentimental...)I can't wait for the next chapter.LOL Sureves Epans
person foxmom
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you are continuing with this story. It is very good so far. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, I'll be honest, when I first saw this story on the Severus/Hermione page, I wasn't going to read it. I thought, "takes the author forever to update each time, why bother?" But then, out of curiosity, I read the reviews for it. They were amazing (of course) and I just had to read it. And, of course, I LOVED it. *sigh*
So now you *have* to update soon.

This story is really well written. There were a few things that I didn't really agree with, but, on that note, there are a few things in the *real* HP that I didn't like...hehehe.
So, yeah. I love that Snape is a smoker. I don't know why, but I never thought of him as a smoker. But, since I've read this story now, I'll never be able to think of his as anything but! I think you portray him PERFECTLY. A lot of people misconstrue his bitterness for being an asshole, but your story doesn't. Agh...I could go on and on, but I'll leave it at that.

ok, I lied, one more thing. The fact that this has been written over the course of a few years and the tone or style hasn't changed really says something about your writing ability. :)

Update soon!!
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're still continuing this story! I did a double take when I saw there was a new chapter, I almost couldn't believe it. One of the few marriage law stories I've read that isn't cliche, and very well written. I like how you still have her grieving for Ron, it wouldn't be realistic to have her get over him so quickly like in many stories, plus how she's still all squickly about the idea of marrying Snape. Cause let's face it, as sexy as he is, the idea of marrying your teacher is still kinda hard to process. Keep this up!
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great and it made me cry at the last chapter looking forward to reading more
person LVanna
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*see's screen*
Nah I can't be reading this right.
*takes off and cleans glasses*
Hmmm, must be something in my eyes.
*Takes off glasses rubs eyes*




OMG... It's true!!! A New CHAPTER!!! *does happy dance - throws confetti - then realizes she has to vacuum it up*

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! I'm so happy you're not abandon it. I love this fic since the first chapter you wrote and been waiting for an update for sooooo long. Will there be any new chapter soon? I do hope so for it's such a good story to be abandoned like that.

Hermy
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person dsm2007
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so pleased Ginny and Hermione have patched things up. Keep the chapters coming :) Loving your writing style. Though I must say, a cigarette-smoking Snape really surprised me. Not sure why ;)