AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Stone Angels

by StarlightSoul

person keep
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really must post more! I\'d read the first chapter back when you first posted it, and wasn\'t interested. I read it again today and couldn\'t tear my eyes away. And now, here I am, begging for more! And I am definitely begging. Please! Write more!
person lydia
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this such a great story. i also hope to find a new posting when i come in here. i like the wat it is heading and looks vert interesting. please keep up with this. can\'t wait til you post again and i hope it is soon.
person Rayven
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story! Is the little girl they found related to Harry? Can you please email me when this gets updated? I would really appreciate it!
person LeeSwain
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more soon, excellent story. I cannot wait to read more of this.
person JJ
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Are you trying to give JKR a heart attack???? You\'ve created a complex, fantasticly intertwined story line with multiple characters worthy of . . . publication! Wow. And you haven\'t even gotten to the good parts yet!!!! You have just become one of my favorite authors. By the way, most authors notice that there is an amazing amount of information in stories so they do tend to get longer.
I love how you\'ve put so many characters into the story line. It\'s nice to know what\'s happening with them. I really like that Nevill plays stupid in your story. This may be the only story I\'ve read in which Snape has a loving family member. What a plot twist with Dumbledore!!!! You\'ve explained why he has done some questionable things. And to think, they haven\'t even gotten to school yet. At this rate, you will have the war won before they get there. Any chance Petunia could end up with Filch? I hope Harry and Draco/Hermonie and Snape will get together eventually. But with such an amazing plot, I\'m willing to read it as long as your willing to write it. Thanks, Thanks, Thanks.
person midnighttiger
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my. i find the characters more than a little OOC but wonderfully done. i feel like im reading a VC Andrews book with all of the abuse and such but i must say i love this story. the house is amazing, Dumbledore is an interesting twist, harry\'s uncontroled magic, and new abilities are wonderful. i love Hermione and her sister, draco and his friends are wonderful, Severus is absolutely amazing (as is his mother...and the fact that he was a twin and that you played up Fred and George\'s fears was wonderfully done!) and i just cant help but love this story. thank you so very much for posting and i hope to read more soon.
person June W
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - I\'m sorry they couldn\'t save more of the Muggles in the church, but without magic, they couldn\'t do much. Hermione\'s right, Harry will want to keep Titania for himself, but I don\'t see how he can raise her while he is still a student himself. Perhaps Severus\' mother can raise her? I like this weapon you gave Lupin; hope to see it again. Thanks for updating!
person Avanell
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter...and Titania sounds interesting. You worked the other new characters in well, too... loved the scary line woven in. Yes, she can be delightfully scary. And PLEASE more interaction with Snape. Oh, of course loved the pointe shoes. I just tried my new pair today...we\'re doing Coppelia next month. Oh, any lemons with Herm/Sev coming soon? Please!!!
person JTBJAB
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....go Harry, but such bad circumstances!

I look forward to your update!
person Anijade
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story quite in depth please continue