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for Moonlight

by MaryslilLamb

person stray523
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story and can't wait to read the next one.
person Ophelia Umbriel
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this story a while back and have been searching EVERYWHERE for it!
I'm so glad I found it again, it's one of my favorites. I really like the wolf senses you convey.
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, nice
person Adrie
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was good. Good and sweet.
person tall freak
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i don't understand why there's only one review on this... it's really well written, actually. nice smut with a background. not entirely canon, of course, seeing that arthur almost got killed over the christmas holidays and they probably had..uhm.. better things to do ;o) but good.
person RachelW
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed the story so far, but chapter ten(I think that was it, after Sirius walks in on Lupin and Milia) has NO PARAGRAPH BREAKS. It would be a good idea to re-format and make sure you've got line breaks and all. I'm trying to read it but can't keep track of what line I'm on. But, I really do like the story, espically the stuff about how a wolf pack is run, and how Surius has to be dominant to tame her. Very, very nice.