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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
one of thst tst things about this fic is that Draco, Lucius and Voldie are very nice guys. I have never use \'nice\' to describe Voldie before!!! Keep undating please.
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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my, i love this
Ron as a bad guy, and youve captured really well how hes in serious denial , man this is excellent :)... the humours had me cracking up at times, and it definetly takes the edge of the subject matter.
Glad i found your good stuff since ffanfic.net betrayed us all (no im not biter, not at all)
Keep on writing
Da Bunny
Ron as a bad guy, and youve captured really well how hes in serious denial , man this is excellent :)... the humours had me cracking up at times, and it definetly takes the edge of the subject matter.
Glad i found your good stuff since ffanfic.net betrayed us all (no im not biter, not at all)
Keep on writing
Da Bunny
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April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Like it!! I\'ve never read a ron/draco slash fic before...they do pair up rather well though don\'t they!! I\'m almost what you might call a convert now. I like this ron- the all-grown-up-and-slightly-crazy-but-relying-on-him-self-alone-not-just-harry\'s-sidekick-ron. If that made any sense. Keep up the good work anyhow!
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April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay i\'ve read it all now and i\'m even more converted! I love chapter 2! Ha ha is was so weird and warped and wonderful! Lucius is fucking amazing- in the film i was lusting after him all the way through it- he\'s so gorgeous. I like the way you haven\'t involved all the other characters which would really distract from the whole ron vs the death eaters plot. It\'s good how you\'ve just concentrated on ron and his changing ideas. Well why should he think on harry really? He\'s helping himself because no one else will. I love it.
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April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the story is GREAT, very well written. I love your Ron. And your Draco is so cute. A handworking (though not very bright ^o^) Draco. Please keep updating.
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March 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is such a good story. I love it! I usualy don\'t like slash and gay stuff, but this is really good! It\'s actualy quite funny, in a weird, twisted way.... I really love it!
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March 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yess.... you\'re making his decent into darkness very well done, it makes perfect sense. how he views life just seems so ... RON. very good, and i can\'t wait for the next part! ^______^ you\'re staying very true to canon, which is strange for a fic like this... very good. ^__^
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March 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, I never thought I would like a Ron as a Death Eater story, but this is fantastic! I really think that it is true to Ron\'s character, he\'s not really evil just doing what he has to to survive. and the part about it just being business is good, it enables him to distance himself from the fight. i also love Draco\'s character. he\'s cute, but bratty and a good counterpart to Ron. Anyway, please update soon! this is really fantastic! i can\'t wait to find out what happens next.
~Sparky
~Sparky
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March 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. The characterization of Ron is believable. The way he takhe Mhe Mark with such nonchalance.. like he has a choice, Lord V looking him over like that, telling him no one has attempted a rescue, implying no one cares for him, except them. I like the way his talent with strategy is making an appearance, it\'s usually not present in a lot of stories I\'ve read. Part of the reason this is so enjoyable, that and the hot sex. The play between him and Draco is simply delicious! And is Draco an agent of the Light, or is my reading of this completely off? It will be cool to see what happens next. Have hope that it ends well for Ron and Draco. And Lucius, love that Lucius, the sexy bitch!
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March 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, bad bad Ronny. He must be punished. Soon, please.