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for Not Quite As Expected

by kishijoten

schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is precious. I adore the plot.
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was an intense story. Never really an m-preg fan, as far as the stories on it I've read, but this was so superb! You covered all these great emotions and such in a short span of time. Wonderful job.
person sedna1
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful and sexy at the same time. I love the storyline. :D ****
person Asmodes Red Gold
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! almost made me cry a couple of times too.
person evalhanne
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful story. It's well-written and has depth. Though the only thing that I thought was odd was Blaise. Is he really a blonde? No, matter, you're the author, your story. I like it any way.
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was by far, the most emotional, inspirational, loving, story I have ever read. I actually cried. You did a fantastic job. I love the way you characterized Draco and Harry in this story. Words cannot express how moved I was by this story. Thank you so much for writting this beautiful story. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

rAiNwAtEr
justice02908@yahoo.com
person Lady X
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was greatness...I just have one little complaint though. Blaise wasn\'t blonde he had dark hair. I don\'t recall if it said it was black or brown but i do remember it was a dark color. Anyway other than that lovely story. I will be looking to see if you have any other work for me to read but it is to late right now.
person Iza
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is so wonderfully written...i think it\'s so cute how harry and draco fall in love with each other even though they try their hardest not to...i\'d like to see how their relationship progresses as their daughter grows up...please tell me that you\'re going to add more chapters or that you\'re going to write a sequel!! ^_^
person LdDurham
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Other than ending rather abruptly, I would say that this is a very well written and meaningful piece. Even the ending was at least not left hanging, just abrupt. Quite enjoyed it. Thank you.
person emaleth57
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely BEAUITFUL!