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for Needfire

by Bicycle

person RachelW
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into a realistically strange, complicated relationship. It sounds like issues are brewing...this isn\'t exactly your typical love and flowers romance and that\'s why I like it. It\'s complicated and strange and has issues...just like Hermione and Snape do. Great chapter!
person mimi
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT is a lemon!! Chapter was beautifully written, never dull or lacking. I thought this last chapter was praise worthy...damn! You sure do have a way with visual descriptions. Shoot, I am in need of a change of clothing after reading this chapter. Keep up the great work. ^_~
person patrice
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grrr how can u leave us like that! really good story, keep it up!
person Fury
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm *dying* to see how they find out about each other, much as I hate to rush you guys... you think you could post more soon??? Please??? For my sanity???
person RachelW
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very nice chapter (11). I greatly enjoyed seeing the banter between Hermione and Snape and the developing relationship between them. It's done very believably, I just love Snape in this. Looking forward to seeing how the fasting bit goes...and the ritual...ahh, ritual sex. Hope you update very soon!
person Yamaa
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. This gets better and better with each chapter. Thank you.
person AJS
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is remarkable, wonderful, if uncomfortable, writing. Thank you.
person Isige
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate the work and the skill that has gone into this story. It is not yet another
person Kathy
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry. This is just over my head. I don't undertsbad it at all. Oh well.
person cavalaxis
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is exquisite. I look forward to the next update with much anticipation!