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for Needfire

by Bicycle

person gothchiq
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! more please :)
person revel
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, So for what i\'ve read is amazing and its great to hear (read) that its finished.
I\'m having a slight problem fully loading some of the chapters - Are they archived anywhere else?

Cheers :)
person ranegrrrl
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Consistently poetic and beautiful. I look forward to every update.
person selened
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just caught up to this story today. It\'s a little strong in places for my taste, but well-written. I\'ll definitely be watching for an update.
person Fury
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit! They\'re writing to her parents??? How -typical of teachers... I hope he sees and that it all comes to a head once they are involved. Wow, I can\'t wait to see how this is played out...
person angie
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait, as usual. Can\'t wait for next chapter and see what you\'ve come up with.
person AJS
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had to stop myself from shouting out, \"Nooooooooooo! Don\'t do it!\".

Superb, as always.
person RachelW
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a powerful chapter. Espically that ending, bringing home the conflict of interest and ethical issues of student/teacher relationships. This story is realistic in that it\'s not glossing over the problems and the conflicts, At the end of the last chapter I was feeling bad for Snape for the way Hermione was treating him, and at the end of this chapter, well, I felt bad for Hermione, that her lover is writing her parents to talk about her past issues in his role as a teacher, but this is still hard for Snape. It\'s so mixed up. Great job you two!
person Angie
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was unbelievable. Excellent, excellent writing.
person aleena
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
professional quality. fascinating and strange. guess ill be able to read past the first 5 in the summer. i dont think i like the plot but i love the style and imagery. the descriptions of people, reactions, im gonna go watch some football now.